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=== Sugar Digest ===

=== Sugar Digest ===

First, an aside: I introduced the concept of peer editing in the [http://en.flossmanuals.net/write_activity FLOSS Manual on the Write Activity] by referencing the late Don Murray, who taught generations of journalists how to write. He had three simple rules for great writing:

First, an aside: I introduced the concept of peer editing in the [http://en.flossmanuals.net/write_activity FLOSS Manual on the Write Activity] by referencing the late [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Don_Murray_(writer) Don Murray], who taught generations of journalists how to write. He had three simple rules for great writing:

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