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== Preamble ==
 
== Preamble ==
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"Worldwide people are testing and improving Sugar on a Stick. With the help of people like you, trying it and telling us what problems and suggestions you have, we plan to having this in the first classrooms this fall and in the first schools schoolwide in the Spring.  This is an all volunteer effort and your help, even now when we still have a lot of bugs, is really important."
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Teachers, students, and engineers worldwide are testing and improving Sugar. With your help—telling us what problems and suggestions you have—we can create a better learning experience for all children.
    
== Issues ==
 
== Issues ==