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=== Used to label a computer with sugar installed ===
 
=== Used to label a computer with sugar installed ===
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I am a chinese toy manufacturer and I'm tired of selling toys to Fisher Price for 99cent then watching them resell the same toy for $99. I have developed a cool looking child friendly green computer that is probably not toxic and can run sugar but no one will buy it because no one has ever heard of me.  
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You are a chinese toy manufacturer and you are tired of selling toys to Fisher Price for 99cent then watching them resell the same toy for $99. You have developed a cool looking child friendly green computer that is probably not toxic and can run sugar but no one will buy it because no one has ever heard of you.  
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I want to put a big picture of the sugar home screen and a '''CONTAINS SUGAR''' decal on the box because then it will look a bit like the XO.
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You want to put a big picture of the sugar home screen and a '''CONTAINS SUGAR''' decal on the box because then it will look a bit like the XO.
    
==== Should we approve this use of our trademark? ====
 
==== Should we approve this use of our trademark? ====
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