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We need your help in unleashing that potential!  If you love children and collaboration and learning, and can help us with learning technology and software and all the important bits that enliven and liberate our human potential, join with us and contribute all those billions of ways to propel Sugar learning into the future.
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We need your help in unleashing that potential!  If you love children and collaboration and learning, and if you can help us with learning technology and software or any of the important bits that enliven and liberate our human potential, then please join with us and contribute some of those billions of ways that '''''you''''' might help to propel Sugar learning into the future.