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=== There are no files, folders, or applications. ===
 
=== There are no files, folders, or applications. ===
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The basic unit of interaction is an <em>activity</em>; it includes an application, data, and a history of the interaction that can be used to resume the activity at any time.
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Sugar has <em>activities</em>.  Activities includes an application, data, and history.  Activities can be resumed at any time.
    
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=== Everything is saved automatically. ===
 
=== Everything is saved automatically. ===
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Our goal is to make it almost impossible to lose any data.
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Our goal is to make it impossible to lose any data.
    
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=== A Journal is used for accessing data. ===
 
=== A Journal is used for accessing data. ===
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The Journal is a diary of things that you make and actions you take; it is a place to reflect upon your work.
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The Journal is a diary of what you make and do; it is a place to reflect upon your work.
    
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