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Sugar Labs, supports the educators and software developers who use and develop the Sugar Learning Platform.  Sugar is a place for children to play and learn.  Sugar Labs is a place where everyone can play, learn, and teach.  The same ideas Principles that make Sugar great, discovery, collaboration, and reflection, are central to the way the Sugar community work. Members of the Sugar community need to work together effectively, and this code of conduct lays down the "ground rules" for our cooperation.
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To be affective, the members of the Sugar Labs community must to work together; our code of conduct lays down the "ground rules" for our cooperative efforts.
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We chose the name Sugar Labs, plural, because we are not one lab, one person, or one idea. We think it captures perfectly the spirit of the sharing and cooperation that is at the heart of the open source movement. In the Free Software world, we collaborate freely on a volunteer basis to build software for everyone's benefit. We improve on the work of others, which we have been given freely, and then share our improvements on the same basis.
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The Sugar Labs community supports the educators and software developers who use and develop the Sugar Learning Platform. Sugar is a place for children to explore, learn, teach, and reflect. Sugar Labs is a place where we all can explore, learn, teach, and reflect. The same underlying principles that make Sugar great—discovery, collaboration, and reflection—are central to the way the Sugar community operates.  
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That collaboration depends on good relationships between developers. To this end, we've agreed on the following code of conduct to help define the ways that we think collaboration and cooperation should work.
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We chose the name Sugar Labs, plural, because we are more than one lab, one person, or one idea. Plurality captures the spirit of sharing, cooperation, and criticism that is at the heart of the free software/open-source movement. We collaborate freely on a volunteer basis to build software for everyone's benefit. We improve on the work of others, which we have been given freely, and then share our improvements on the same basis.
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If you wish to sign the code of conduct, you can sign the [[need link].
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That collaboration depends on good relationships between developers (and end-users). We have agreed upon the following Code of Conduct as a guide to our collaboration and cooperation.
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This Code of Conduct covers your behavior as a member of the Sugar Community, in any forum, mailing list, wiki, web site, IRC channel, install-fest, public meeting or private correspondence. The over sight board will arbitrate in any dispute over the conduct of a member of the community.
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If you wish to sign the code of conduct, you can sign the [[need link]].
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This Code of Conduct covers your behavior as a member of the Sugar Labs community, in any forum, mailing list, wiki, web site, IRC channel, code-sprint, public meeting, or private correspondence. The Oversight Board will arbitrate in any dispute over the conduct of a member of the community.
    
== Be considerate ==
 
== Be considerate ==