Sweets Distribution: Difference between revisions

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=== Ubuntu and its derivates ===

Register repository ~~with~~ importing its gpg key. For example for [http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ Ubuntu-11.04] repository, ~~type~~ in a terminal:

Register a repository by importing its gpg key. For example, for the [http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ Ubuntu-11.04] repository, enter the following in a terminal:

sudo apt-add-repository 'deb http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ ./'

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sudo apt-get update

Install full Sweets Distribution, i.e., Sugar Shell and Fructose activities:

Install the full Sweets Distribution, i.e., Sugar Shell and Fructose activities:

sudo apt-get install sweets-distribution

Install only Sugar Shell:

Install only the Sugar Shell:

sudo apt-get install sweets-sugar

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== Usage ==

To run Sugar in emulator mode, select ''Education/Sugar'' application menu item or ~~type~~ in a terminal:

To run Sugar in emulator mode, select the ''Education/Sugar'' application menu item or enter the following in a terminal:

sweets-sugar-emulator

To login ~~into~~ Sugar session, choose ''Sweets Distribution'' session type.

To login to a Sugar session, choose the ''Sweets Distribution'' session type.

== Feedback ==

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 === Ubuntu and its derivates ===
-Register repository with importing its gpg key. For example for [http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ Ubuntu-11.04] repository, type in a terminal:
+Register a repository by importing its gpg key. For example, for the [http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ Ubuntu-11.04] repository, enter the following in a terminal:
   sudo apt-add-repository 'deb http://download.sugarlabs.org/packages/SweetsDistribution:/0.94/Ubuntu-11.04/ ./'
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   sudo apt-get update
-Install full Sweets Distribution, i.e., Sugar Shell and Fructose activities:
+Install the full Sweets Distribution, i.e., Sugar Shell and Fructose activities:
   sudo apt-get install sweets-distribution
-Install only Sugar Shell:
+Install only the Sugar Shell:
   sudo apt-get install sweets-sugar
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 == Usage ==
-To run Sugar in emulator mode, select ''Education/Sugar'' application menu item or type in a terminal:
+To run Sugar in emulator mode, select the ''Education/Sugar'' application menu item or enter the following in a terminal:
   sweets-sugar-emulator
-To login into Sugar session, choose ''Sweets Distribution'' session type.
+To login to a Sugar session, choose the ''Sweets Distribution'' session type.
 == Feedback ==
 {{:Platform_Team/Sweets/Feedback}}