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~~We believe that~~ Sugar is a ~~superior learning~~ platform for children.

Sugar is a high quality software platform for children to learn with, especially younger children.

Sugar is a learning ~~platform used by children around the world~~.

Sugar provides a framework for programs that encourage learning through self-discovery.

~~Sugar provides a unique set of activities that encourage self-discovery and allow collaboration~~, expression, and reflection ~~directly within the learning experience~~.

Collaboration, expression, and reflection are integrated into every Sugar program.

~~We believe that Sugar is among the best means of engaging young children in the world of learning through digital technology.~~

Our ultimate goal is for Sugar to be accessible to every child and every teacher in every school, all around the world.

Our ~~ambition~~ is ~~that~~ Sugar ~~could~~ be accessible ~~for any~~ child and ~~any~~ teacher in ~~any~~ school.

We ~~want~~ to ~~expand the Sugar community so Sugar can be used~~ in all countries, in all languages, and in all cultures.

We are growing our community to include users and contributors in all countries, in all languages, and in all cultures.

~~Our ambition is that Sugar can be used~~ on ~~any~~ device~~: a desktop or laptop computer, tablet~~, ~~or smartphone~~.

We are developing our software to run on every computer device, from desktops and laptops to tablets and smartphones.

Sugar ~~was developed originally for~~ the One Laptop Per Child project and ~~the XO laptop~~.

Sugar began in 2005 as part of the One Laptop Per Child project and today it is vigorously developed by Sugar Labs, a volunteer-driven and non-profit organization.

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-We believe that Sugar is a superior learning platform for children.
+Sugar is a high quality software platform for children to learn with, especially younger children.
-Sugar is a learning platform used by children around the world.
+Sugar provides a framework for programs that encourage learning through self-discovery.
-Sugar provides a unique set of activities that encourage self-discovery and allow collaboration, expression, and reflection directly within the learning experience.
+Collaboration, expression, and reflection are integrated into every Sugar program.
-We believe that Sugar is among the best means of engaging young children in the world of learning through digital technology.
+Our ultimate goal is for Sugar to be accessible to every child and every teacher in every school, all around the world.
-Our ambition is that Sugar could be accessible for any child and any teacher in any school.
-We want to expand the Sugar community so Sugar can be used in all countries, in all languages, and in all cultures.
+We are growing our community to include users and contributors in all countries, in all languages, and in all cultures.
-Our ambition is that Sugar can be used on any device: a desktop or laptop computer, tablet, or smartphone.
+We are developing our software to run on every computer device, from desktops and laptops to tablets and smartphones.
-Sugar was developed originally for the One Laptop Per Child project and the XO laptop.
+Sugar began in 2005 as part of the One Laptop Per Child project and today it is vigorously developed by Sugar Labs, a volunteer-driven and non-profit organization.