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<span class="linkgroup">[[Image:Question.png|65px|link=Sugar_Network/Logo]]</span>

This work was initially started by an International Research and Development Team affiliated to Sugar Labs Perú as part of the Malla Project ~~iniciative~~ in order to attend the needs identified during field work on Perú from 2007 to date.

This work was initially started by an International Research and Development Team affiliated with Sugar Labs Perú as part of the Malla Project initiative in order to attend the needs identified during field work on Perú from 2007 to date.

== Summary ==

These are the major goals Sugar Network ~~is trying to achieve~~:

These are the major goals of Sugar Network:

* Sharing different kinds of content within the Sugar community, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. for friends, a class, parents, teachers, or Sugar Learners anywhere.

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For a more detailed description, see these references:

* [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Red_Az%C3%BAcar Red Azúcar] first client of Sugar Network.

* [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Red_Az%C3%BAcar Red Azúcar] - The first client of Sugar Network.

* [[User:Alsroot/Sugar_Network_brief_introduction|brief introduction]],

* [[Sugar_Network/Declaration_of_purpose|declaration of purpose]].

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=== Install on XO laptops ===

To ~~easy~~ use on a XO laptop, download images built ~~withing~~ the [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Proyecto_Piloto_Hexoquinasa Hexokinase] project:

To easily use on an XO laptop, download images built within the [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Proyecto_Piloto_Hexoquinasa Hexokinase] project:

* For XO-1 laptops<br>[http://download.sugarlabs.org/hexokinase/Factory/xo1/hf6.img hf6.img] [http://download.sugarlabs.org/hexokinase/Factory/xo1/hf6.crc hf6.crc]

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=== From Web ===

Or, try Sugar Network from demo web server:

Or, try Sugar Network from a demo web server:

* [http://network-testing.sugarlabs.org/ network-testing.sugarlabs.org].

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== Donate ==

[[Crowd_funding/Sugar_Network|Help us]] working on Sugar Network implementation on regular basis.

[[Crowd_funding/Sugar_Network|Help those]] working on the Sugar Network implementation on a regular basis.

== See also ==

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 <span class="linkgroup">[[Image:Question.png|65px|link=Sugar_Network/Logo]]</span>
-This work was initially started by an International Research and Development Team affiliated to Sugar Labs Perú as part of the Malla Project iniciative in order to attend the needs identified during field work on Perú from 2007 to date.
+This work was initially started by an International Research and Development Team affiliated with Sugar Labs Perú as part of the Malla Project initiative in order to attend the needs identified during field work on Perú from 2007 to date.
 == Summary ==
-These are the major goals Sugar Network is trying to achieve:
+These are the major goals of Sugar Network:
 * Sharing different kinds of content within the Sugar community, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. for friends, a class, parents, teachers, or Sugar Learners anywhere.
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 For a more detailed description, see these references:
-* [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Red_Az%C3%BAcar Red Azúcar] first client of Sugar Network.
+* [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Red_Az%C3%BAcar Red Azúcar] - The first client of Sugar Network.
 * [[User:Alsroot/Sugar_Network_brief_introduction|brief introduction]],
 * [[Sugar_Network/Declaration_of_purpose|declaration of purpose]].
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 === Install on XO laptops ===
-To easy use on a XO laptop, download images built withing the [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Proyecto_Piloto_Hexoquinasa Hexokinase] project:
+To easily use on an XO laptop, download images built within the [http://pe.sugarlabs.org/go/Proyecto_Piloto_Hexoquinasa Hexokinase] project:
 * For XO-1 laptops<br>[http://download.sugarlabs.org/hexokinase/Factory/xo1/hf6.img hf6.img] [http://download.sugarlabs.org/hexokinase/Factory/xo1/hf6.crc hf6.crc]
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 === From Web ===
-Or, try Sugar Network from demo web server:
+Or, try Sugar Network from a demo web server:
 * [http://network-testing.sugarlabs.org/ network-testing.sugarlabs.org].
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 == Donate ==
-[[Crowd_funding/Sugar_Network|Help us]] working on Sugar Network implementation on regular basis.
+[[Crowd_funding/Sugar_Network|Help those]] working on the Sugar Network implementation on a regular basis.
 == See also ==