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==== Using the marks without prior written permission ====
==== Using the marks without prior written permission ====
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You may use the Sugar Labs Marks without prior written permission for the following purposes (subject to the other sections):
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You may use the Sugar Labs Marks without prior written permission (subject to the other sections):
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#To refer to the Sugar Labs software in substantially unmodified form. "Substantially unmodified" means built from the source code provided by the Sugar Labs project, possibly with minor modifications including but not limited to: the enabling or disabling of certain features by default, translations into other languages, changes required for compatibility with a particular operating system distribution, or the inclusion of bug-fix patches). All such minor modifications must be released under an [[Oversight_Board/Meeting_Minutes-2009-12-11#Non-FOSS_content|approved license]].
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#For example, to refer to the Sugar Labs software in substantially unmodified form. "Substantially unmodified" means built from the source code provided by the Sugar Labs project, possibly with minor modifications including but not limited to: the enabling or disabling of certain features by default, translations into other languages, changes required for compatibility with a particular operating system distribution, or the inclusion of bug-fix patches). All such minor modifications must be released under an [[#Approved licenses|approved license]].
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# To identify Sugar Labs software as a distinct component of a software offering. Please note however that we prefer that Sugar be described as a "learning environment", not a "desktop", and its programs as "Activities", not "applications".
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#Or to identify Sugar Labs software as a distinct component of a software offering. Please note however that we prefer that Sugar be described as a "learning environment", not a "desktop", and its programs as "Activities", not "applications".
==== Using the marks with prior written permission ====
==== Using the marks with prior written permission ====