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| communities need sunlight, water and modern tools; a majestic forest | | communities need sunlight, water and modern tools; a majestic forest |
| will come. Organized Community Mentoring within OLPC Contributors | | will come. Organized Community Mentoring within OLPC Contributors |
− | Program (which I overhauled earlier this year thanks to a dedicated | + | Program (which I overhauled [in 2009] thanks to a dedicated |
| team of volunteers) has proved instrumental to this end. | | team of volunteers) has proved instrumental to this end. |
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| the coming decade, open to all meaningful partnerships, while always | | the coming decade, open to all meaningful partnerships, while always |
| protecting our organic grassroots. This will not be easy, but the | | protecting our organic grassroots. This will not be easy, but the |
− | lifelong friends I've made over the last 2 years in the OLPC/Sugar | + | lifelong friends I've made over the last [3 years] in the OLPC/Sugar |
| community will make this possible. Kids need healthy families to | | community will make this possible. Kids need healthy families to |
| explore their worlds, not tabloid divorces, to advocate for | | explore their worlds, not tabloid divorces, to advocate for |