Sugar on a Stick/Ê»ÅŒhelo Ê»ai: Difference between revisions

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A new release of documentation should come out with each new release of SoaS (although resources have prevented this).

The Fedora-site documentation ~~may~~ not be an improvement over our Sugar Labs, ad hoc wiki documentation methods, as the tools needed to participate are more complicated~~, and the Spin page documentation is not open~~ to ~~editing. The Fedora Sugar on a Stick pages have not been edited~~ since Mirabelle was released in May 2010.

The Fedora-site documentation seem not to be an improvement over our Sugar Labs, ad hoc wiki documentation methods, as the tools needed to participate are more complicated & yet to be used since Mirabelle was released in May 2010. The only help links on the Fedora Spins download page, [http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/18/html/Installation_Guide/ch-new-users.html#sn-which-download-bt How do I use this file?], are very complicated with generic information for Fedora installations.

~~The attempt~~ to better support a small number of known, working, "how to set up SoaS", instructions ~~has not~~ yet ~~been~~ fulfilled.

Our attempts to better support a small number of known, working, "how to set up SoaS", instructions have yet to be fulfilled.

== Press coverage ==

Feel free to add links to press coverage you find about ʻŌhelo ʻai to this section.

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 A new release of documentation should come out with each new release of SoaS (although resources have prevented this).
-The Fedora-site documentation may not be an improvement over our Sugar Labs, ad hoc wiki documentation methods, as the tools needed to participate are more complicated, and the Spin page documentation is not open to editing.  The Fedora Sugar on a Stick pages have not been edited since Mirabelle was released in May 2010.
+The Fedora-site documentation seem not to be an improvement over our Sugar Labs, ad hoc wiki documentation methods, as the tools needed to participate are more complicated & yet to be used since Mirabelle was released in May 2010.  The only help links on the Fedora Spins download page, [http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/18/html/Installation_Guide/ch-new-users.html#sn-which-download-bt How do I use this file?], are very complicated with generic information for Fedora installations.
-The attempt to better support a small number of known, working, "how to set up SoaS", instructions has not yet been fulfilled.
+Our attempts to better support a small number of known, working, "how to set up SoaS", instructions have yet to be fulfilled.
 == Press coverage ==
 Feel free to add links to press coverage you find about ʻŌhelo ʻai to this section.