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<p style="font-size: 1.3em; background: #edfdd7; padding: 10px; border: 1px solid #cde7a8">'''Sugar reinvents how computers can be used for education.''' Sugar promotes sharing, collaborative learning, and reflection. Children and their teachers have the the opportunity to use computation on their own terms; with Sugar, they are free to reshape, reinvent, and reapply both software and content into powerful learning actitivies. Sugar is a [[Community/GettingInvolved|community project]]; it is based on GNU/Linux, a free and open-source operating system.</p>
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<p style="font-size: 1.3em; background: #edfdd7; padding: 10px; border: 1px solid #cde7a8">'''Sugar reinvents how computers can be used for education.''' Sugar promotes sharing, collaborative learning, and reflection. Through Sugar's clarity of design, children and their teachers have the the opportunity to use computation on their own terms; they are free to reshape, reinvent, and reapply both software and content into powerful learning activities. Sugar is a [[Community/GettingInvolved|community project]]; it is based on GNU/Linux, a free and open-source operating system.</p>
    
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=== You use a journal for accessing data. ===
 
=== You use a journal for accessing data. ===
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It's like a diary of stuff that you made and a place to reflect upon your work.
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It's a diary of things that you made and a place to reflect upon your work.
    
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