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== Summary ==

~~The~~ major goals Sugar Network is trying to achieve ~~are~~:

These are the major goals Sugar Network is trying to achieve:

* Sharing different kinds of the ~~content~~, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. ~~within the~~ Sugar ~~community~~.

* Sharing different kinds of content within the Sugar community, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. for friends, a class, parents, teachers, or Sugar Learners anywhere.

* ~~Positive~~ interaction between content creators and users.

* Productive interaction between content creators and users.

* Online + ~~Offline~~ access to the content for all Sugar Network participants.

* Online + offline access to the content for all Sugar Network participants.

* ~~Provide support~~ for localized and sustainable *collaborative activities*.

* Support for localized and sustainable *collaborative activities*.

For more detailed description, see:

For a more detailed description, see these references:

* [[User:Alsroot/Sugar_Network_brief_introduction|brief introduction]],

* [[Sugar_Network/Declaration_of_purpose|declaration of purpose]].

Sugar Network is a part of [[Platform_Team/Harmonic_Distribution|Harmonic Distribution]] effort.

Sugar Network is a part of the [[Platform_Team/Harmonic_Distribution|Harmonic Distribution]] effort.

== Further reading ==

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 == Summary ==
-The major goals Sugar Network is trying to achieve are:
+These are the major goals Sugar Network is trying to achieve:
-* Sharing different kinds of the content, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. within the Sugar community.
+* Sharing different kinds of content within the Sugar community, e.g., Sugar Activities, artifacts created by Sugar Activities, books, etc. for friends, a class, parents, teachers, or Sugar Learners anywhere.
-* Positive interaction between content creators and users.
+* Productive interaction between content creators and users.
-* Online + Offline access to the content for all Sugar Network participants.
+* Online + offline access to the content for all Sugar Network participants.
-* Provide support for localized and sustainable *collaborative activities*<!-- does "activities" mean sugar activities or activity in general? ~~~~ -->.
+* Support for localized and sustainable *collaborative activities*<!-- does "activities" mean sugar activities or activity in general? ~~~~ -->.
-For more detailed description, see:
+For a more detailed description, see these references:
 * [[User:Alsroot/Sugar_Network_brief_introduction|brief introduction]],
 * [[Sugar_Network/Declaration_of_purpose|declaration of purpose]].
-Sugar Network is a part of [[Platform_Team/Harmonic_Distribution|Harmonic Distribution]] effort.
+Sugar Network is a part of the [[Platform_Team/Harmonic_Distribution|Harmonic Distribution]] effort.
 == Further reading ==