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=== Sugar facilitates sharing and collaboration. ===
 
=== Sugar facilitates sharing and collaboration. ===
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Children can write documents or make music together with ease.
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Children write documents, share books, or make music together with ease.
    
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=== There are no files, folders, or applications. ===
 
=== There are no files, folders, or applications. ===
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What you do is an <em>activity</em> and that includes the application and all your data.
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The basic unit of interaction is an <em>activity</em>; it includes an application, data, and a history of the interaction that can be used to resume the activity at any time.
You can resume any activity at any time.
      
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=== You use a journal for accessing data. ===
 
=== You use a journal for accessing data. ===
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It's a diary of things that you made and a place to reflect upon your work.
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It's a diary of things that you make and actions you take; it is a place to reflect upon your work.
    
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=== Sugar is free and open-source software. ===
 
=== Sugar is free and open-source software. ===
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There are no strings attached and updates will <em>always</em> respect users' freedom.
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Sugar is licensed under GPL; updates will <em>always</em> respect the freedom of its users.
    
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